Please review my lyrics pls?..................?

honestly, i don't like it. as a previous answerer said that it sounded like hannah montana, and it does sound pretty Disney-ish. the "rhyming" and in general the match of the lyrics is a little awkward, and some of it makes you sound a little justin bieber/kid singer esque. just saying, snd i really dont mean to be mean. i would just wantyou to be prepared for meaner. at least it's not another love song.